I like this- i think you could do something with- not sure what as well, but i think this is cool

I like the idea of how the ideas about the world change and keep changing. I always like picking up old things I have written!

This almost readds like a poem as far aas wording goes, and it seems like something that you wrote further upon because of that last line. It would make for a nice introduction to a story.

Cool starting and it appears you did your research, that is exactly what people thunk. Bad grammar there. Anywho, I will return to this story as soon as you post the next chapter.