I loved this, but you may want to leave out some details, seeing that this site has some young members.

Your writing is **. Please give up.

aw i really liked your ending for this story! gabriel and ellie were so cute together. it was pretty frustrating that it took her so long to reveal the truth but i'm glad they finally got together once he knew who ellie was. i really like all of your stories!

Aw i love this storry!


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Ali

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Good job.
Keep writing.

HEY!
Just thought I'd drop a line to say tht I REALLY loved this story... to absolute pieces. It is SO sweet. :P
The only thing I wanted more of Gabriel's reaction to Ellie at the wedding but hey, not really tht important. I'm just being really picky, it SERIOUSLY doesn't matter tht much :D
Well, have a gd week!
BYE!!
x x x

I like it =)

Oh wow, I know you wrote this a long time ago, but this was a really great start to your story. For once, I don't feel like I'm reading the next chapter just because I hope the story will get better. It already has me hooked.

This was by far one of the greatest stories i have ever read.

I absolutely love this story, especally when it involves priates, even smipirates. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.

damn, ur stories r kinda addicting, bleh. =] i lik the pirate ,ixed w/ cross dress theme.

[i should point out that gab calls "leo" a her, she instead of him or he. u should fix tat cuz it get confusing since gab does think ellie is a boy right now.]

=]

really good, i like it.

wow, that's a really good story!
I especially loved the ending, thanks a lot!

Oh my gosh that was so great! seriously, i just wasted tons of time sitting here at the computer to read a story... but it was so good! i loved it all =)

Clavel, I love your stories so much. Hahahaha. They're fun to read. I enjoyed this one a lot. :)