Its over? Oh, well. It was an awesome story. It is now in my faves. i loved it. you are a really great author.

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That was beautiful.

I always love your stories.

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*looks down sadly* Aww so sad for it to be over but it was a wonderful journey. I loved it and will miss it dearly. This was a wonderful conclusion. Aw such a big happy family! I wish family's were like that in real life. I do hope you upload you're new story soon. You're a wonderful author.

You have done an awesome job with this story!

aww the ending is so sweet. I really liked this story, good job! : )

this story was excellent wish it did not end. keep up the good work

wonderful ending, i couldnt have wished for more! yay!

Really loved this ending! It was so sweet. Gabriel's just a big softy, isn't he! I loved it! Congrat's on a great story! Can't wait to read your next!

SO CUTE!

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Aww, I loved this story, maybe best of all of yours!

It's adorable.

And Gabriel is so drool-worthy :D

Off to read Written in the Rain! :D

Lots of love,

Katty

awss that was so sweet and wow thats alot of baby baking ;) but he gave up everything for her..thats just romantic..and haha bess and smith finally...Great story! it was good...but those stupid old mans fighting for ELLIE's inheritance is just plain dumb...there are many more better things in the world than money...well they get what they deserved. GREAT WORK

The story had been superb!

This was an amazing story. Keep writing and you'll be a star.

aw i love it! one of my fav stories! great job!

Aww, awesome. Heh, Gabriel's turned so corny, it's sweet. I loved reading it till the end.

lovely end