Lol, how did Mr Fairfax (the name sounds familiar...it's from an Austen novel right?) get to St Lucia before Eliie and Gabriel? I'm thinking British Airways, or Ryanair if pushing it, but that's me trying to put a smile on your face. Planes didn't exist back then.

So just how did he get there so fast?

Yah u make good stories, although I felt this one was a bit cheesy towards the end.

That was one great story! I love it!

This was very good

That was a wonderful introduction. :)

Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. I'm pleased to tell you that your story has been added to the ADoR archive. Congratulations. :) Here's your raving review:

It's adorable and cliche, what's not to like? Not to mention that it's complete and has all those elements that we romantics feed on. It's funny and written in the 1800s (not the high school romance you were expecting!). The prose is lovely and it's a must-read!

XOXO,

Juliet

Enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing.

So I think the good Captain is going to have to make a quick decision here! He can't let Townsend marry Ellie off to his lover! Ew!

So has the dear Captain figured it out? Ellie saved Gabriel with her salt water treatment...and her loving care. He has to know!

Poor mixed up captain!

Looks like 'Leo' is making herself indespensible. Even has the captain thinking about her! I wonder how far behind is trouble?

The exact ship she was looking to go with finds her...must be fate!

Enjoyed this first chapter. Orphan Ellie...neglected by all except Bea. So what is Ellie planning?

aww I fell in love with your story you had me reading it from beginning to end without stopping now I need to go to sleep. lol

good job (:

aw love it!