Oh wow, I know you wrote this a long time ago, but this was a really great start to your story. For once, I don't feel like I'm reading the next chapter just because I hope the story will get better. It already has me hooked.

This was by far one of the greatest stories i have ever read.

I absolutely love this story, especally when it involves priates, even smipirates. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.

damn, ur stories r kinda addicting, bleh. ] i lik the pirate ,ixed w/ cross dress theme.

[i should point out that gab calls "leo" a her, she instead of him or he. u should fix tat cuz it get confusing since gab does think ellie is a boy right now.]

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really good, i like it.

wow, that's a really good story!

I especially loved the ending, thanks a lot!

Oh my gosh that was so great! seriously, i just wasted tons of time sitting here at the computer to read a story... but it was so good! i loved it all )

Clavel, I love your stories so much. Hahahaha. They're fun to read. I enjoyed this one a lot. :)

hiya

I've actually read this already, but i have no idea why i didn't reveiw. So here is your review. I love this story very cleverly written and another one of your best.

I so love these types of stories, they are fun, daring and exiting.

Angel

aw love ending :}

i love Gabriel and his possessive streak of Eliie. so cute and HOT

love it

very wonderfully written and heartwarming indeed!

I can definitly see how it won "best lust scenes" on

That's where I originally found you, but only now could i update.

its a sweet story at the end anyway, though. :)

*squeals*

Ohh that was so cute!

I loved it ! D I love Gabe, though Zane is still no.1 for me. I think Gabe is now 2nd. I love his possessiveness. It's so cute. )

All the Love...

Just one more review...

WHAT AN EVIL CLIFFY!

I have to go now so I'll never know what happens until tomorrow or something!

AH! I'm already going insane!