wow, and to think i'm a year older.. lol. nicely done!

me filipino too, nice to meet you

[ happy birthday to me ;) ]

I love math metaphors.. they make me smile.. awesome job

Interesting piece. It's always fascinating to see how differently people can use math in pieces. I've done it at least once myself. Good metaphor. Keep writing! :)

I'm a fool for poetry that involves science or math for some unbeknownst reason, so I love this. and you still don’t know…

i can equate you to zero)- so nicely done, honestly.

Amazing ending. Love it.

oh my gawd! you don't even know! i love this to death! it inspires me and it's going in my favorites. i love you!

Sunshine

I loved this, it really cut right through me and the maths included, really worked as an analogy. (an you still don't know..i can equate you to zero) - stunning ending. Continue writing

i like this poem. my ex is in my algebra class, so this struck summin inside me.. . .

i normally can't stand mathematics used in poetry but this is interesting. especially the ending. nice.