Reviews for Don't Look Down - FictionPress.com

Almah 2007-04-12 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this a lot! The whole thing is woven with excitement. My favorite part was the last stanza…awesome. The rhyming is good for the most part, though I felt it was a little forced towards the end. Still, I thought the rhyming added to the energy in an interesting way. Overall it works. Good job! Keep writing.
hellbentheretic 2006-11-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is about striving for something, maybe the impossible. That is what we do, especially when we're young, is to strive for that goal that looked huge and awesome and spoke to us and said, "Come and get it." No one said this road would be easy and I think you have captured that well. I like the bit about the sun shining from below- nice touch! hellbentheretic