FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| starstruck143 2006-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent beginning!Very descriptive and easy to follow,sounds like it will be a good read. |
| Krazi Dreamer 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseYou've set the scene nicely and i cant wait to find out what happens next, please update soon! |
| coltsrule 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abusegreat intro. sounds very interesting. update soon and check out my story. im a new writer and i need advice. your story sounds very sad but is great so far. |