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Reviews For: Destructive Freedom

And Your Little Dog Too
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abusereally well written but the last line is kinda strange i thought it was only four syllables...
lackluster
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abusei don't know what to say, except i really like this. that's the think about haikus: every word counts. and you made every word beautiful. lovely.
Basara
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abusepayment for your freedom?

nice...
Guardrail
2006-11-09
ch 1,
abuseWonderfully written, I really like this haiku a lot. Very well done. Keep it up.
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