The flow in your verse is amazing. YOur metaphor is quite thought-provoking too and makes a lot of sense. In each problem I come across in life, I always try to find one good thing that will come put of it. This is my favourtie poem by you so far.

I love the imagry and the metaphors in this. So well written. The lines, "felt the earth go wet and limp beneath me as I stood" is especially vivid. I enjoyed reading this piece. Great work and keep writing.

I like it lot. And I love the fact that it's a metaphor. Good job!
thanks for the review!
~Rowan~