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Brown Eyed Goddess 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. The lonely-ness, longing for touch. I've had it. Still do. ((Not that I can CONNECT with you, because we all have different lives, and we all have our own thoughts and such.)) Wonderfully well done. Thank you for sharing.
Icicle Tears 2007-03-01 ch 1,	abuseWow... You remember that poem of mine, A Step Behind The Romantics? It really connects me to this one. I know exactly what you mean. Jared, that's the boy's name, is the most beautiful boy in the world... I only wish I knew him better. Is it possible for two people to have the exact same feelinsgs about the same things? It seems so with you and I. Hmph. Why is it that I can connect every one of your poems to a personal experience? Am I just unfortunate, or are you just a good poet? I'd rather think the latter, really. Oh well, I don't think I want to consider that anyway. Bravo, again. Icicle Tears P.S. I'm racking them u^u^u^u^u^u^u^p...! XD
sincerely.i.am.yours 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is so complex and intriging. I keep reading it over, and over, its beautiful and well written. Great Job!
Idiot Pilot 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abuseThe last five lines were definately the best. It is very realistic , about loneliness and using non-human objects to pretend about humans... not that I would know or anything... psh.
Faithless Juliet 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseWonderful detail and honesty, I loved how passionate the emotion was. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet.
daisy dreams. 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseoh my gosh. thats so beautiful . you are very talented!
Nina Bruja 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abuseTechnicalities aside, because there are no grammatical or spelling errors, it pretty much comes down to content and personal preference. I just couldn't get into the rhythm you were trying to establish. I didn't really like how some lines repeated the last word of the previous line. And I'm not a big fan of nature-ey poems; I tried to write them myself when I was younger, but found them to be cliche and overdone. The parentheses are a nice touch. I'm sorry I couldn't give you a better review, but like I said, it all comes down to personal preference, so I hope you don't take it the wrong way.
Trumstan 2006-11-18 ch 1,	abuseDon't see a lot of this kind of poetry today. The feeling grates through to me, no bars to hop over or hoops to jump through; makes me all but flinch at the end. Cattails are messy. And fun.
Rosemarine 2006-11-17 ch 1,	abuseIt appears you've already recieved plenty of praise for this, so I'll just skip to the coments... I see you're kinda into anima/myasaki (just want to say Princess Mononoke is my favorite too!) The poem has a very placid, consistent mood punctuated by an odd note every now and again, which sortof reminded me of anime cause it's like all so pretty and then randomly something rather odd. But this adds flavor and creates a writing style that is unique to you, which is definite plus. And thanks for reviewing my poem, bytheway
Xerophyte 2006-11-16 ch 1,	abuseOh wow. This is amazing (like usual). I love it, love it, love it! I love the part about looking int absence, the softness that may never be you lips, all of it. It's length is nice. I love how your poetry tells a story instead of describing a scene. This is great. Thanks for your reviews! -Xero
epic tsubaki. 2006-11-15 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful...starkly realistic. Amazing imagery here. I'm favoriting this, keep writing! ~c&l
multiples of six 2006-11-15 ch 1,	abuseThat was so pretty. The imagery is fantastic, and the emotions are so true they're almost painful. I love it.
Midnight Star Lights 2006-11-15 ch 1,	abuseAlways such beautiful work from you. You are amazing... Anyway, SMILES :)
Awen1923 2006-11-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very lovely poem. You do an excellent job creating a mood and maintaining it. You also have some very good images and some great lines.
Even Gods Dream 2006-11-12 ch 1,	abuseThat was really beautiful. Really strong imagery and I loved the tone. Keep it up Even Gods Dream x

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