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| rebeldork 2006-11-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is probably the best poem you've written, IMHO, so keep it up! (We should team up and write an epic poem about angels, muahaha!) But, has someone been reading a little too much Edgar Allen Poe, methinks? "Nevermore" "seraph" "cherub"? It's okay if you did, it's not stealing, and you borrow the words quite nicely. Good work, keep it up! |
| Oracle Of Seraphim 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Your imagery was so cool and elegant it made me shiver! (In a good way) |