Chapter one: They coulda use to planes to fight the dead instead of destroying them.

wouldn't the people be safe in helicopters or airplanes? and just shoot the zombies from up there? zombies wouldn't be able to fly.

This is amazing
I wish you would update

This was good. Although, I felt as though when the zombies surrounded the Tribune employees, the proceeding brawl went a little too quickly. Also, if having one of them get bitten outside.. it was predictable that it would be Greg, what with him already having been scratched by a zombie. Although, I guess you couldn't really get around that. Don't want to dwindle the numbers too drastically, so early on. The armoured character was an interesting twist. You never see anyone in zombie flicks or whatever sporting solid armour to protect themselves.. and you'd think that would be one of the first things a person would do. Also, I like how your characters aren't wielding your a-typical guns or blades to dispatch the zombies. They use good old fashioned bludgeoning weaponry. Nice. Still, this was good. A couple of things maybe to improve upon, but overall good.

And so it begins. Great stuff. The writing is great, a few spelling/grammar issues that a qualified beta reader could iron out for you. I like the characters you've introduced - Jake seems like a real tough nut and James seems like a total douchebag. Those two are my favorites so far. I was kind of happy/sad when James survived. Part of me was glad, because he is an interesting character. Another part just wanted his big mouthed ** to get bitten and die, lol. The tension you display in your dialogue was top notch. This is really good, I shall continue.

I read this before, but never reviewed it. So, lets start. The opening prologue is great. I love your writing style, its fresh. The general concept of a zombie epidemic has been done many times, yet I still feel already as though you are bringing a fresh look to it. The Graveyard concept was a cool idea, with military destroying airports and patrolling the waters. That's something new to me. Overall, a great start.

just one question:"where did all the helicopters go?"

This is truly an excellent story! I've enjoyed every chapter. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Whoa... This is really really good. I love your heartless violence and dark, depressing insight on characters. Its horror at its best!

awesome! im writing a zombie epidemic too, can u review mine? thanks!

Great chapter! The suspence is building in Boulder, and I can't wait to find out where it leads!

Very good i hope you decide to finish it, i really liked the switching perspectives. I don't know what else to say except good job.

This is a very good story that i will continue to read. I love the detail and the amount of compassion you make your readers feel for some of the characters. I have a story that has zombies in it also it is much different from yours but i was wondering if you would read it and review it with some feedback on what i could do better.

I have to say that I loved the story so far, I started to read it and forgot where I was. It pulled me in and didn't disappoint me. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat. Keep up the good work!

Hi there. I just wanted to express to you how wonderful this story is to read!! I totally love the style you write in. The story lines are so interesting and exciting to read! All the characters you have created are so intriguing and I got to tell you I get so involved with the story I shout out load when things happen! I have read a lot of zombie novels in my day but I have to say yours is my favorite by far!! I hope one day you are published! I can't wait to read more of this exciting story! I'm on pins and needles waiting for a new CHAPTER!! I hope you find the time to write one soon! Thank you for providing me with such an entertaining and wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next!! I do have to say I was so sad to see Matt parish. He was such a good "zombie hunter"!
Much Respect!
Jen =0)