 Orual 2007-06-24 . chapter 1Heh, it's cute. A little cliche, but cute. I was kind of hoping for a twist at the end (honestly, I was looking for the girl to die), but I liked it, anyway. The aunt certainly found an interesting way to get killed.
There are a few awkward sentences, like "Why, here was a coin collection, and from the dates, were worth a fortune!" but that's just a product of being unedited. I like this piece as a glimpse into the mind of Anij. |