I love this story. Very good. Keep writing!

I really like this one. People don't write ryming ones as much and this one really reminded me of how simple yet beautiful and powerful they can be. Really good job.

I like the soul searching here. The girl has fallen to the lowest of lows and now she is going to get up, and she is going to fly!

Excellent "strata ultima" (thought provoking last line)

yes... it has just begun...

nice...