Wow. I thought the other half was good, but I love this. You've captured the emotions perfectly, and managed to write them down in a way that isn't self-pitying. Love it x

Wow I absolutely loved that...It REALLY reminded me of Hinder's Lips of an Angel...(was that your inspiration?) great song really if you havent heard it you should listen. but it kinda also reminded me of my latest failure of a relationship with a guy who was and still is my best friend after all of that. But I really enjoyed that story.It was really great. Kudos love.

Beautiful...Seriously, I loved it. I know EXACTLY how she feels. True-to-life emotion. Bloody brilliant:)

--Ravyn Starkweather

I really liked this...it was really powerful and good...good job and keep writing! Please review back =]
~Frodo