Oh, wow, I love this. I love how you incorporated the color red throughout the poem, and your images are just crazy and phenomenal. I really love this whole poem, and I think my favorite stanza is the 3rd one. "coiled red-muscle flanks of cat-beasts" is seriously some strong imagery. Going on my faves, and so are you (assuming I don't have my faves full - yipes). Keep writing! :)

i love the fragmentation of this poem - a disjointed mass of images and colours. it's somewhat chilling, but the lines that stood out the most for me were the the last two lines of the first stanza. & i love the graphic descriptions of the second stanza. lovely.