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| contrast and friction 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very honest poem. I absolutely loved the beginning, it really drew me in. Your manipulation of words and the ease with which your work flows is captivating and I really enjoyed reading it. This was a piece with real feeling in it, and the honesty of that emotion makes it so much more intense. Nice write :) |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt and honest. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |