|Reviews for Fallen Grace of a Star|
| Hear As The Outcasts Hear 6/26/07 . chapter 1
That's really good! I loved the 'star light, star bright, what do you see tonight'. very clever! good job!
(the whole poem was good :D)
| fharfalla 12/20/06 . chapter 1
wai! I really really really love this poem! your stories and poems are very good! that's why I added you to my favorites list! very dark!
| beauty is skin deep 12/14/06 . chapter 1
I love it all to death.
| Harper K 12/12/06 . chapter 1
This gives good visuals! I like when you bring hell into it, it really gives it an edge. I like this one! :3
| Guess Who 12/4/06 . chapter 1
This is amazing.
| Hard Metal 11/21/06 . chapter 1
Simply Amazing! you chose perefect words, and you showed a certain image, i liked it!
| Mortifer Amor Phasmus 11/18/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this is excellent. I love it. Nice symbolism.
| mizu no kokoro 11/17/06 . chapter 1
sad... i like the contrast between light and the idea of war. good work
| SassyLil'Thunderstorm 11/15/06 . chapter 1
wow, sheds new light on the old childhood rhyme and makes it more deep and thoughtful. I wish it were longer, if you ever consider re-writing it. There's so much you could do with the repeating lines. But I still love it a lot, maybe you could do two versions. ;)
| MidnightStar005 11/15/06 . chapter 1
This I wrote in study hall when I was rather bored. I was thinking dark thoughts, of course. Anyway, I happen to like this one. I don't know that it could be better, but I like the way it came out. I am really happy with it I mean. I would really like it if anyone would read and reveiw. If you don't like it then that is okay as well. I should know that you think that. I don't mind what people think as long as they say it not as a flame. Thanks so much to everyone at I really enjoy reading everyone's work. You are all great writers to me.
| Niels Stegeman 11/13/06 . chapter 1
A very interesting piece, which I have enjoyed reading. Wonderful imagery, too. So, well done and keep writing!
| La Rose Negra 11/10/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. I liked the repitiion of the "Star bright/Star light/What do you see tonight?". I like the word choice. The line "When their lust can’t fore fill their lust" confused me. Who's lust can't fore fill who's lust?
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