I love this. I adore the ending, it was so wonderful. At first it seemed repetitory, but that ending. Wonderful job!

-Ashelin

DUDE! The beginning seems very cliched at first, but then I realized where you were going with this. The message IS somewhat of a cliche, but the way you write it is very unique. Well done!

I love this idea. Very, very good job. *adds to favourites*
~Rowan~