AH!!

Oh.My.Gawd! That was so adorable! Ha-ha, when I wanted Sakuba and Gakuya to end up as an item at the begining I never thought it would happen! But this is SO CUTE!

I really hope you update this soon, I'm dying to find out what happens next! ^^

-Kaiyako K.

Hey!

Great work, like again! ^^ I know I said I would review after I finished chapter twenty, but I wanted to here, so I did! LoL.

Koyanagi "Kei" and Ruri "Sugase" you also used both of those names for your other story "His Brother, My Rival"

AHA! So Yonai likes TOUJIWARA!

Waha! BADASS!

Muwahaha! Ran-chan's such a perv xD

Omg! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chap!

GOOD JOB!

-Kaiyako K.

Hey!

Well, good chapters so far! I really like the character of Kimiko's brother Shin, he's probably my favorite! Well honestly, I love all your characters, their just so adorable! Well...except Ai Yokokawa I guess. She's just kind of mean.

Ahh! I'm still rooting for Gakuya and Yonai to end up together! I have decided that it's my favorite pairing now! Ha-ha, the names of Kimiko's twins remind me of two brothers from "Initial D" Kyosuke and Ryosuke Takahashi.

Once again great story, and I really love the special sections at the bottom! ^^ I'll leave my final review when I finish chapter twenty, though I am kind of sad this story is coming to an end.

Which reminds me. Is this story finished, because you haven't updated in a while. But it still doesn't say "Complete" at the top. I'm wondering if thats just an error, or if you're really not done yet.

AWESOME STUFF!

-Kaiyako K.

Hey!

Sorry I haven't left a review in such a long time, I'm still loving your story! I'll admit Ichihara's really growing on me. Sakuba's still my favorite on terms of who'll get Ranmaru though.

The fan-club is hilarious, I mean they beat up the high school thugs before anyone else could get there. It's funny imagining that, and I can SO imagine Fujita becoming a Physical Education teacher.

LoL, Once again I love your story and terrific chapter.

Later!

-Kaiyako K.

Hey!

Haha, I just saw this story and I thought I would give it a read. So far, I really like it! The plot flows well and the style of writing you picked with it is superb! ^^

But, also as I was reading I started to pair up the most random people together! Ha-ha, well here goes.

-Ranmaru and Sakuba (If he ever notices her, Lol, but it's so cute how she's got a school girl crush on him!)
-Toujiwara and Sakuba (I told you it was random: CRACK PAIRING! There tempers say it all! But really, they would be cute!)
-Fujita and Chiyo (Dunno it's cute?)
-Gakuya and Chiyo (He's sweet and helpful, and she's well...in need of help!) [Not in a bad way]
-Gakuya and Sakuba (CRACK PAIRING! Random seeing as they don't talk...but hey what the heck) L.o.L

Well, okay I'll have to say my favorite female character so far is Sakuba, don't really know why. But I like her. As for male character, I would say Gakuya but with Touji in a close second! ^^

Hmm...If I take a wild guess is your favorite character Ichihara Kimiko?

L.o.L, sorry for the long review, I guess I got a bit carried away.

Till next time! Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon!

Kaiyako K.

Hiya, Ready-sama! I have decided to give you a review and whatnot. =D I haven't seen you in MSN for quite some time, so I shall spill my adoration for this story here. Aah, so much Touji love! xD He's still my favourite among the four guys. And *gasp!* Is Yonai realising her feelings for Touji? Don't tell me, just write and I'll find out. Haha~ Bye! Hope to hear from you, yeah?

For the record, Fuji deserved a smack at the beginning of this chapter. So did Ranmaru. But Fuji!! *wail*
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“Fujita-sempai.” She said looking down. “I love you.”

AW... She seems so shy... I feel really bad for her..

Oh look, Fuji hit himself. Well, okay, that's better. I like Gaku's approach to helping Fuji, but Fuji must feel pretty frustrated by it..

Wow, there's quite a few new names in this! I like "Aida". It's nice. And Yukio sounds like Yugioh.

hmm..

flubbed is a funny word.

I like the way that Fuji resolved things.

That bit with Ruri and Tetsu was so random, but it made me happy ^^;
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“Toujiwara!” Ruri looked up with tears in her eyes.

“Wha?”

“Thank you.” She said getting up and hugging him.

“Um…” He said uncomfortably.
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I'm picturing a chibi version of Ruri clinging to a normal sized Touji's waist. It is a very funny mental image.

DUDE, i SO hope that Yonai is jealous XD. *still rooting for Yonai/Touji shipping!!* *pumps fist in the air*

(If not Touji, then definitely Gaku... *o*)

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

she likes touji? yay! yonai finally takes a pick! erm, sunao and shin are a cute couple. can i ask for more info about them? or better yet, chap!! eheheh. update soon n_n

Teehee, he dressed up as a cowboy. >3< So lazy, Touji. I love when stories include halloween, 'cause then you get to picture the characters in costumes. Which is really fun.

Fujita really reminds me of Yuki. xD He's so darn cute!!

Bwahaha, I decided to review this chapter. Ranmaru = love. n.n He's mah fave. And Fujita is cute too. Like I said before, Touji's favorite word seems to be the f word, though that amuses me sometimes... heh.

Yah, so, now I gotta go write my stories. )< You have inspired me.

"More like independantly annoying." Toujiwara grumbled.
TEEHEE

I REALLY like Kimiko-chan XD I wish I had shown more of her in the video! Hm...

Mamoru reminds me of a little boy named Kevin. He lived with my friend's family for several years even though he wasn't their kid. He went back to China yesterday =( So sad... I'm going to miss him.

Kimiko's brothers kind of remind me of Fred and George Weasley ^^;
"Bravo, gangster-chan!" LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

OMG THAT WAS MADE OF AWESOME. These guys are going on my favorite characters list!!

Ranmaru is so conceited -_-;;

"Goodbye Mommy!" HEEHEE. *hugs Gaku*
"It's the daddy!" OH GOSH EVEN BETTER LOL

This is going to sound terrible, but i can't understand how anyone would love Ranmaru ._.;

I like Kimiko.. And I like her brothers. All three of them.

O_O IS FUJITA RURI'S SPECIAL GUY? O_O;;

probably not...

Hm...

=O
YAY FOR TOUJI COOKING! *o* Men who cook are SO COOL...

.> How can Yoko look down at someone who is taller than her? o.O

"He only dated her for over a year." ONLY?!! That is a long time... O_O;
I don't like Yoko. =/ That is a horrible reason to break up with someone. She seems elitist.

And Toujiwara felt he had ulterior motives…
HEEHEE ^^;
I guess smiling is just what Gaku does when he's at a loss of what to say... @_@ i wonder if his face hurts at the end of the day..?

I really like Touji's mom ^^;

WOW I REALLY DON'T LIKE YOKO. GR LEMME AT 'ER! *makes the MSN angry face* OMG OMG OMG... >.< ToT
That got me all riled up...

Man... Gaku must feel so horrible, too... ;_; This is sad, i was starting to really like the idea of Gaku and Yonai... *rushes over to give Gaku a hug* poor Gaku *pat pat*

AND... WOW the ending blew me away...

*shiver* YAY THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER TO READ!!
I should give myself RedLady marathons more often. this is awesome!!

Toujiwara opened the door right then and took one look at Kimiko and said, “Go home.”

LOL LOL LOL LOL

I really liked the first part of this chapter, that entire scene at the table was just great like frosted flakes.
but you said Gaku came into the kitchen to give them the snacks but... wasn't he already in the kitchen to make the snacks...? o.o;

"I already am number one, Japan just doesn't know it yet." was another great like ^_^

Koyanagi is an interesting character... hmm.. i wasnt expecting him to really like Yonai in that way, so i was surprised.
I still root for Touji or Gaku.

Ichihara is so amusing XD I like her more and more every time i see her. i like how she is loyal to House 4, and told them everything :)

im totally going =O about the next chapter...

This is utter hilarious! I'm enjoying the story so far and Gakuya-san is definitely my favourite among the 4! Hope to know more about him too XD (Btw, I've a story that's quite similar to this too. About a girl living with 9 brothers under one roof! Please check it out if you have time ;) The title's: A Simple Wish) Keep up the good work! Ciao~

We’re gonna cook Yonai a love meal!” Fujita explained.

GREAT LINE!

++ I liked how he kicked at the ground when he said "aww, not kendo!" i thought that was cute

I have to say, i really like Gaku's flirting style. very sneaky O_O

What was on the computer screen?? @_@;

I AM SO HAPPY THAT TOUJI WON A ROUND! EVEN IF IT WAS BY ACCIDENT! YAY

LOL, RANMARU SCREAMS LIKE A GIRL!

hee, a tie! a tie!!

but i kinda felt bad at the end... Touji acts so tough...

i liked this chapter, its one of my favorites so far. actually, i think it IS my favorite. yay!