I like this one, it is very very good!

Jess

Aww this one is really sweet. I really like it.

Well, just don't go grabbing at every guy who claims that they want to rescue you, otherwise, great! Nice poem, I sense that you want someone, maybe to replace someone else? I don't know, I just always put in my two cents. Haha. Well, great job, God bless!

Wow, I've felt this strongly as of late. The sense that I need to be stronger for someone, to save them.

Your form here is very good. I like your voice. I feel a passion coming from this piece; like you've felt this feeling too, a desire to be more for someone you love.