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| gkcouch 2007-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseA very good poem, even if it is "a little awkward". |
| Loopdeloop 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abusethis is uniquely suited for the haiku format. as suggestions, remove the part in brackets of the description (you should never say what a piece is about), and don't apologize for as in the portion before the line break. if you have to, at least place it after the work, so readers can go into it with no expectations. |
| Arabella Jade 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abusein a strange way, i loved it. |
| UnAble and UnHeaRd 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseOoh... Creepyish but I like it |
| Shadows in the Fire 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseUm...freaky... |