I like how you edited different parts, to make them stand out- it helped the poem.
And, the poem, (sigh). sad and honest; whoever said that the truth isn't painful must have lied their lives away.
I love that all your poems are just so...real and honest and simple. It gives them life.
Definately Fav. Author-worthy.

I like the way you enphisis different points differently, it really helps your poem. Right now I know I similar feeling. check out my latest poems please (and email me it's been to long).
good work. you pulled the heart strings.

I loved this poem! Loved loved loved it! I can't say I felt the exact same thing... but somehow I can still relate to it, a lot actually. It's complicated! ^^ But anyway... it's amazing!

How tragically sad. I have felt something similar and it isn't nice. You put it into words beautifully at least, so your pain did not go to waste.
(unless this was made up... (I have friends who do that) in which case, you did even better.

Well, you can't make someone have feelings for you if they don't. They just have to happen. Your poem is very raw and honest.

That's just heartbreaking. Beautifully written, though. I got a little choked up reading it...there's just so much emotion in it. Beautiful job.

I wish a guy like you would feel the way about me. You were able to calculate my feelings to an exact point. Unfortunately for me, I don't have an admirer like you. Because if I did, I'd know it would be something special. Tell her, I'd know I'd want to know. Show her, I'd know she'd like to see and feel. Write to her, beautiful words such like yours could change any woman's opinion. Thank you for giving me a chance in believing in your gender for once this whole week. Unlike this special girl of yours, I don't have "him" writing to me, or for that matter of fact, maybe, I don't know, seeing what I am offering him. Keep on writing. I don't have half the courage to post my poetry up online. For me, it's always the fear of rejection. LOL!

I love this; I feel exactly the same way about someone. Amazing work.

Katrina xx