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| simpleplan13 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI like the tone in this... normally poems about this are so bitter or angry or angsty and this is somewhere in the middle.. i like it a lot... well done |
| Princess-anna57 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha Claire's review made me laugh... um... okay, I'm good. :) Wow Josh! This is really good. Always be positive! :) Please keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Hidden Lies 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI've read this one. I like it. I think IH ave told you that already. It is deep and telling. Awesome. Luv Liza |
| Jess 2006-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abusewow josh... i really know where ur coming from... been down that road b4 =( (long story) luv it!! x |
| Guardrail 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written, I really like the feeling in this. Great structure and flow too. Good work and definatley keep writing. |
| fragileHeart101 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseCant really relate to this.. but you wrote it well, and it touched my heart :) |
| Autumn Reflections 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseOMFG I JUST REVIEWED THIS!! NO! THE WORLD IS ENDING! Yeah, i mean, hormones. The right person will come along, just wait and focus on your lego models like a good boy. Good poem, good structure, keep smiling. Keep writing Joshy!! |