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Reviews For: Zero is the Way our Love Should Be

simpleplan13
2007-01-04
ch 1,
abuseI like the tone in this... normally poems about this are so bitter or angry or angsty and this is somewhere in the middle.. i like it a lot... well done
Princess-anna57
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseHahahaha Claire's review made me laugh... um... okay, I'm good. :)

Wow Josh! This is really good. Always be positive! :) Please keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
Hidden Lies
2006-11-13
ch 1,
abuseI've read this one. I like it. I think IH ave told you that already. It is deep and telling. Awesome.

Luv Liza
Jess
2006-11-12
ch 1, anon.
abusewow josh... i really know where ur coming from... been down that road b4 =( (long story)

luv it!! x
Guardrail
2006-11-11
ch 1,
abuseWonderfully written, I really like the feeling in this. Great structure and flow too. Good work and definatley keep writing.
fragileHeart101
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseCant really relate to this.. but you wrote it well, and it touched my heart :)
Autumn Reflections
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseOMFG I JUST REVIEWED THIS!! NO! THE WORLD IS ENDING!

Yeah, i mean, hormones. The right person will come along, just wait and focus on your lego models like a good boy.

Good poem, good structure, keep smiling.

Keep writing Joshy!!

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