This is awesome! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest and I am so happy that you updated (ie restarted your story!)

it's better than your previous work, more descriptive and the characters seem more plausible! however since this chapter was short, I hope you'll update soon!

Well, your classes certainly didn't go to waste! Your writing ability is excellent. Why is it every main character has to be a misunderstood fellow with blue eyes, though?

So far, it kind of reminds me of Braveheart.