awesome imagery in such a short poem...very deep and emotional...loved it...great job ;) magnus

bloody, uhm... I wonder? what does it taste like an candy cane made from an arm? ( just what I think of candy an be fitted to an arm...lol )

nice...

its pretty...although im quite disappointed that the lines have to be broken and you had to use a hyphen just to fir the nomber of syllables per line...but you did it really pretty...


truly yours...