 CanadianCookie 2009-08-30 . chapter 65Haha, creepy. Boys; never doubt the power of Celeste. XD |
 King0Mik 2009-07-01 . chapter 64Cats are one of my favourite animals. If you're out of ideas so far, maybe you could write the story that Celeste and Seth write together. Maybe include mermaids. Or something. Anyhoo, as I did for Kometto High, I'm giving you the meaning and origin of the names:
Seth:Hebrew:Appointed
Celeste:Latin:Heavenly
Sylvia:Latin:Forest
Celina:Latin:Heaven
Lucia:Italian:Light
Kylie:Aboriginal:Boomerang
Cassandra:Greek:She Who Entangles Men
Siri:Scandinavian:Victory
Vincent:Latin:Victorious
Alec:English:Defender of the People
('Kuro' means 'Black' in Japanese)
Leon:Lion:French
Damien:Greek:To Tame, Subdue
Maria:Latin:Sea of Bitterness
Michael:Hebrew:Who is Like God?
Marcus:Latin:Warlike
Manuel:Spanish:God is With Us
Mia:Scandinavian:Sea of Bitterness
Yuki:Japanese:Snow or Lucky
Chloe:Greek:Verdant And Blooming
(And again, I could not find Suzu, but I did find Suzuki.)
Suzuki:Japanese:Bell Tree
Roy:Scottish:Red
Alexandria:Greek:City Of Alexander
Alex:English:Defender Of The People
Lily:English:Lily Flower
Lumina:Slavic:Sunshine
Sally:English:Diminutive Form Of Sarah
Xavier:Latin:The New House
James:Hebrew:Supplanter
Jack:English:Diminutive Form Of John Or Jackson
Speaking of names, how do YOU pronounce 'Lucia'?
Apparently, one of the rules of an Italian name is that if a 'c' is before a front vowel, you pronounce as 'ch.' |
 Alice0Lucy0Raven0Solay 2009-04-08 . chapter 63Ha! I love the ending to this Chappie. It makes me smile, though I wonder how she got copies of all the keys so quickly without anyone noticing... |
 CanadianCookie 2009-02-21 . chapter 62Yay! Chapter 62 is finally out!
I found some typos that I'm too lazy to tell you about, so, er, good luck finding them!
Thank you for writing awesomeness and please update soon! :D |
 Latios151 2009-02-16 . chapter 62Okay, this is gonna be a long review... so, where to begin...
I'll start saying that I registered here pretty much for the only purpose of reviewing this story and getting email when you post new chapters. Amazing huh? But I really like your stories, and this fic in particular I hold dear for various reasons.
You see, I had actually read the whole story up to chapter 61 one a while ago. Back when I started reading it I had a big crush on a girl. Actually, it was my first crush -ever- (pretty late considering I was 18 at the time), so I identified myself -a lot- with Seth (I share his personality quite a lot, actually, up to the point of being sometimes mistaken for a girl on the Internet, just like him XD). BAck then, I laughed and cried (and I mean literally) at every good and sad moment in the story, I -lived- it, as if I was in it. I think your fic was actually one of the (various) things that gave me the courage to actually confess to that girl. She didn't return my feelings, but I'll never regret telling her.
Two weeks ago, (that's almost two years since I began reading Lonely Days, and I still don't have a girlfriend... but that's okay, I'm waiting for the 'one') I was checking this fic for updates, and seeing that you hadn't updated it in a while I said: "Hey, let's read it again!". And so I did. Maybe this time I wasn't as involved as I was back then, and I didn't laugh or cry at every chapter, but I finally managed to read it as it was meant to be read: I managed to read it as a light novel instead of a "cathartic book" for broken-hearted people, and I think I managed to enjoy it more.
So... what I wanted to say is... Thank you. Really thank you. I really, -really- like your stories, and I hope you'll keep writing as much as possible. Because you're really good at it. Seriously.
--Now, let's talk a bit about your other stories!
I started reading Kometto High just before re-reading Lonely Days and I like it a lot. It gives the 'slice of life' genre I got used to in 'Lonely' a nice fantasy/horror twist. And the characters are portrayed beautifully as always. By the way, am i right in thinking you were inspired by 'Rosario + Vampire'? The basic premise is pretty similar. I actually decided to watch it for that very reason. The plot you came up with is still very original though.
Also, two years ago, even before I started reading Lonely days for the first time, I was reading "Whimsical dreams". I thought it was good, and it had a nice 'Oh! My Goddess' feel to it. I won't ask you to continue it (if you stopped, then you had your reasons to do it), but since it's because of that fic that I started reading Lonely Days (You weren't updating it so I decided to check your other stories) it has some kind of 'special value' to me, so it'd be nice if you could send it to me via e-mail or something...
--A present!
I've made you read all this huge rewiev, so I think you deserve a gift. You see, while I was re-reading 'Lonely' I decided to browse the Internet to see if I could find anime pics of people looking like your characters. I didn't find much... until I stumbled on a pic (two pics actually) of a girl that looked just like Celeste, purple hair in a huge ponytail and all. One looked like it was taken at the summer festival, during the fireworks. I could have sent it to you as it was, but there where still a couple of things that looked different (such as eye color and the kimono's "bow" being pink) so I used my uber image editing skills and, after some work, I can finally give you...
Celeste! http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=celesteldfinalnr5.jpg
(It's an imageshack link, clink on the image to enlarge it. If it doesn't display the image or it displays a different image, send me a mail. Also send me a mail if you want a higher quality version, a wallpaper version, or the other picture I found. You can also suggest other modifications to the picture.)
So... See ya! Thank you for reading all this! And update soon! ^^ |
 yoshawn 2009-02-02 . chapter 61Now that's an amazing story! Can't wait for more. I love the style of writing and the characters and you bring it all together so seemlessly. The summary threw me off a little cause it was only after a few times of seeing it that I actually decided to take a look and I was hooked before clicking to the next page. Brilliant writing and I would definitely recommend this to any and everyone. Keep up the great writing! |
 MatsuGlare 2008-11-09 . chapter 44“Now (no), but that’s the third good setup I’ve had today.” Celeste answered as they started moving again. Seth just answered with a nervous chuckle.
I found a minor error here, maybe a typo error...
Silvia, I prefer Kuro over Leon. Kuro belongs to the cool types of guys that i like. lol. this is just an opinion, okay? but i would really be happy if you pick Kuro. He's the cream of the crop. Can't wait who you'll actually pick. (i do write very long reviews, don't I? lol.) |
 MatsuGlare 2008-11-09 . chapter 43You might be probably wondering why i'm giving this much reviews. The reason behind it is because i just can't help myself from reading this fic (isn't it obvious? lol). I really love this. Keitaro-kun is really cute, i hope he really likes Celeste. Seth is a bit talkative now and i really find it cute. (lol) And oh, the hug was cute. :)) Gosh my internet is driving me nuts! |
 MatsuGlare 2008-11-09 . chapter 42haha...i've read this one too...great idea about the whole priestess thing...i was already imagining that things were true and i was slowly digesting it but luckily it was only a dream...lol nice chapter! |
 MatsuGlare 2008-11-09 . chapter 41i can really imagine Celeste having a breakdown! this is a really nice chapter...the festival was the most fun part...espescially the one with the fireworks display...Celeste...is so love her personality...:)) sorry for the late review, i was hooked up with a lot of things lately...but anyway, i so love this chapter...one of the best i have read so far... |
 Fantasywriter150 2008-06-18 . chapter 58The instant I see the title of the chapter, I think "The melancholy of haruhi Suzumiya". Beyond that... I fear for pretty much everyone (outside of Seth, for some reason) who's into her popularity bit. I wonder what you'll be giving us next chapter... |
 MatsuGlare 2008-05-21 . chapter 1lol...i really love this story...i even printed almost 40 chapters of this..lol...please update! =) |
 Fantasywriter150 2008-04-15 . chapter 56Other than saying that for some reason, Seth's attitude makes me chuckle a little, the most i have to say on this chapter is... I wonder what the girls will have in store for him |
 Fantasywriter150 2008-03-12 . chapter 55Finally get around to reading and reviewing. The Christmas chapters were quite sweet, and this latest chapter... well, the only thing thing I can really say about it is that Celeste's in denial about her and kids... should you put some sort of epilogue that takes place in the future, I'm really curious to see how that would turn out. Otherwise, as I always say, keep up the excellent work on this story. |
 Koyuki-chan 2008-02-16 . chapter 52A very cute chapter. Only a few mistakes, like repeating "she knocked on te door" at Sana's visit, but I see fewer and fewer mistakes! Finally Celina's secret revealed, and in a great way too! I would have never suspected a soap opera star. Thanks for the new chapter! Keep up the good work! |
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