Wow, this is brilliant! I love Sylvia Plath and you really do her justice here. Excellent and very inspiring.

Um, could you explain some of this to me? From what I can understand of this (I've never had a poetic point of view), "She" does things, but cannot feel or find the opposite that will help her.

Failing Mentality.

This is nice. There are a lot of vivid, intriguing images in this piece. I like the way you describe fantastic, surreal images in an everyday way, as if someone in your cup is a perfectly ordinary event. It provides interesting contrast. Keep up the good work!