Oh. Wow. That was amazing. It sounded like...it sounded like I was narrating. You're a brilliant writer. The way you conveyed the emotions, and how honest and bitter that was. Wow. I love it.

WOW...this is B-E-A-UTIFUL. Just...brilliant

"and darling, i love the way they told me how pretty

i was because i had lost some pounds"

I love this line...it is so true...excellent work

it begins at the end, really, because that's all you have the energy to say.

this was perfect. for sure.

If I had to pick four people who deserve to go to Heaven, you'd probably be on that list. For all the things you've done, are doing, and have been through (many of these things which most people would claim have reserved you a spot in Hell), I think that you should be granted a position among the angels. Keep writing; you're very good.

This is excellent. It’s raw and emotional. The images are terrible and the writing is beautiful. I really liked your use of parenthesis, too. They’re easy to overuse, but you used them tastefully and skillfully. Keep up the good work!