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| paper ink flowers 2006-11-13 ch 1,  | abuseyou still havent burned the drawings. btw, can i film it? and i lurve you so much! i regret having any part in this... |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseLove... I will punch anyone that tries to hurt you at your command... say the word and im there. I'm behind you 100% nomatter what happens.And know this... You are the most important person to me and I love you oh so very much XOXOXOXO |
| BDhei 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseBeing that I despise poetry, and that I am a ** when it comes to grammar, these shall be my comments: Poem: It's not bad, but it didn't flow very nicely. Grammar: There are some problems with this one. EXAMPLE!: "You thought is funny," that irked me a little... Poem overall: Not bad, but needs some revision. - B. Dhei - |