PLEASE update.! I'm loving this! i love Danielle and Cheyenne as middle names, the later more so. Little more uncommon.

i seriously will die if you don't finish this!

o... m..g one of the best I've read in a long time and i'm a really big cridic.. very picky! i love it. i jut don't have time to read the other two chapteres tonight! but i will i promie you that. you realy did a great job with this pleas keep up the good work!!

wow, i can't decide what to say. I've sat here, not getting up from my chair untill i finished this chapter and wow. This is great! I've been searching for something like this, something thats amazing and wonderful at the same time! And i found it in your story. ^^
~Sora Okami, S.O.

Ps- I like Holly Savannah, Cheyenne, Scarlett, Brooke, and Nicole. They're all beautiful names, i wish she could own them all, but like Alexa said, it's probably not best for Holly to be one of those children with a million names! *laughs*

heya, this is a great story so far. i can't wait for more! i think you should name her holly marie by the way, it sounds better than the other options i think. cya next time ~ Alenor.

Nice story!
I like:
Holly Brook
Holly Nicole (!)
Holly Abavee
and
Holly Danielle
I think I like Nicole best...
Don't forget to update!
-Lilly :)

Holly Cheyenne

Ellie I love it!! It's so wonderful. Keep working at it because I want to read more!! Anyway I really hope that Holly does become Lexie and Aaron's. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
xoxo,
Skye

Pizza sauce is better than baby food. When my sister was a baby, I used to eat her baby food, but I'm now a junk food addict. I hope everything goes okay with the adoption, it would really suck if something fell through now.

aw I LOVED it!


K.k.

Good chapter, as always. I like the Aaron/Lexie focus, well this is a Romance story...

Good symbolism with Aaron catching Lexie. Could be useful in later chapters if need be. (Excellent forshadowing opportunity - able to be put into good use. eg. concilliation after fight.)

Holly's odd appearance still hasn't been explained. Maybe a hint or two could be dropped, same idea with the forshadowing.

Anyways, sorry for going all English teacher on you. But my English teacher of last year had a HUGE thing with forshadowing, especially in Shakespearean texts.

Thanks for the comment about my name. It's inspired by the story of my life. Can never find THE fairytale prince who will "rescue" me. Sigh. Sorry about the long comment.

Great story. I really adore it. I just wondered, how come there's nothing about Aaron and Lexie's parents?

This chapter was great, I can't wait to read more! I really like this story, it's wicked cute. Update soon!
--Ally

Aww! He proposed! That's so adorable. And they're going to be a cute happy little family! Update soon!

YAY you updated i really like this story YAY i think they should b married so im happy he proposed such a cute little family AW cant wait to read more.

Aw, this story's so cute! I can't wait to read more of it, I want to know what wrong with Holly. Please update soon!!
--Ally