I love it so much!! I love that they got together at the end. Also I really like how you switched back and forth between years because it really added meaning to the story. I love it!!
Keep writing. I love your work.

That was really cute. A bit confusing at first, it took me a while to realize that it was switching time periods. When I did realize, it definately gave the story a lot of depth.

Haha. My accounts. hehheh. Cookies. *goofy smile*

Oh right. Story. Sorry.

There are two Allies in my new band: Allie G. and Allie K. Funny you keep picking names of people in my band. ;)

Interesting so far. Keep working at it.