Again...i love it!
As you can see I'm reviewing each and every one of your stories...you're definetly on my favorites list!

I must say that it really tugged at my heart strings especially the last sentence. After reading it i just sat there thinking wow and i don't do that very often. It makes you think. Good job!

Aw this is really sweet! Very romantic and very sad at the end. I especially liked the last line, it's a good simile. The paragraph's are REALLY short though, and I would have preferred (personally) if they were just in one paragraph or made longer, because at first it looks like something that's not quite a story but not quite a poem. Otherwise it's good.