This is really rather poorly written. It suffers from a lot of awkward infodumping and grammar errors, especially in the early chapters, and as a whole, it feels very rough and unfinished. Maybe a beta could help, or perhaps a general rewrite?

That was great!! I love it!! But you need a BETA, no offense.

Wow, that was an excellent conclusion to the story. I loved it.

Sorry for taking so long to review. I never forgot this story though :)

Continue to write, because you really have something going for you here.

~Carm~

Hahaha! I really enjoyed this! Like a twisted yet classic beauty and the beast! Nice! It's goin on my faves!

You switch tenses a couple of times, from past to present; it's always back to normal (aka, past) in the next sentence, but it threw me for a loop a couple of times. I like the interview; it was really amusing.

Actually, Bella has the right of it: in the original Beauty and the Beast, he was HAPPY to have her around and was very polite and everything. To the Beauty, not her father. He was still kind of a bastard to her father, but to Beauty he was great. I guess Disney changed it because it added to the whole motif of "true love conquers all; even seemingly unconquerable hate!"

I loved this story! Though you have made quite a few grammatical errors (Usually just making things singular when it should be plural) it was really well written. I really enjoyed reading it :)

I just read through it all - it's fantastic! I have no other words, I really, really enjoyed this!

I think one of my favorite parts of this story was how you wrapped it up. Using Journalists and articles for the Epilogue I felt was brilliant. I'm also glad that you didn't let the transformations completely strip them of their characters. I think you wrapped it up very well, and that Bella and Ayden will be very happy. Thanks for a good read!

Liked teh way you introduced Bella. I Think you mean desperately did not want to be doing this, and there were a couple of other typos as well. Loved the reaction of the mother though, and the conniving. Well done.

I really liked Ayden losing his temper, and the way you dealt with the fall out from that. It was good to see how he and Bella reacted to it.

I enjoyed reading this, it was a refreshing take on the fairy tale.

There were lots of intersting bits that made it more real as well - Like Tanya's music spell. I think I'd use that one if I could.

I did notice you sometimes use capital letters after commas when you write dialogue though.

I really found myself sympathising with Ayden's frustration too.

Hi! I'm so sorry I have not had the time to review. Although, I promise I have been reading every chapter faithfully in between homework and NaNoWriMo. Just out of curiousity, will Tanya and Oberon ever have a happily ever after? Or will they forever be a never?
Luv ya doll, and thank you so much for finishing it.

YAY! OMG! I loved it! Not yay that it's over, but yay b/c it was so good!!

Sigh, does it have to be over? I loved Ayden's surliness. I'll miss it and Oberon too. He is freakin' hillarious.

OMG!! This was a frickin' AWESOME! Story!

*chants*
Post the next chapter! Post the next chapter!

Oh My God!!
*munches faster and faster*