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| Alexa Twitch 2008-08-28 ch 15,  | abuseI love the Oberon thing! Kinda like an FTIA. Fairy Tale Intelligence Agency. Keep up the good work! |
| grumpirah 2008-08-28 ch 15, | abuseI hope Caeli doesn't show up and ruin Bella's first ball. And if she does give it a try, how about making her suffer total and complete humiliation? |
| KimHua 2008-07-31 ch 14, | abuseWell, I've just read all 14 chapters one after the other... :-) It's a great story, and a nice take on the traditional fairy tale. I've really enjoyed the humour, too. The way you began the "falling in love" thing with Ayden was great - the occasional thoughts, the sudden unexpected urges to protect Bella, and so on. Very well done. :-) Please don't "rush" the ending - take as much time story-wise as needed. Things are obviously speeding up as the deadline nears, and so on, but please keep the tension rising for as long as necessary to bring the story to its proper conclusion. :-) I look forward to reading more! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-07-28 ch 14, | abuseI LOVE THE STORY! cant wait for more! hope you update soon! im so addicted your a great author!! --ifly*hugs* |
| g 2008-07-28 ch 14, anon. | abuseMore MOre More MORE! |
| Lalaith7 2008-07-13 ch 13, | abuseI officially love you! I've always thought Shakespeare was a bit overrated and I love P&P and The Great Gatsby, although I'm not a fan of Bodice rippers, my guilty pleasure books are those by Meg Cabot. |
| beccabrighteyes 2008-07-13 ch 13, | abuseThis is really cute...I don't remember putting it on my alerts list, but there it is, and I'm glad. I'm actually doing a beauty and the beast retell myself, but its nothing like yours, other than I also chose Bella for my main character's name. |
| Carmel March 2008-07-11 ch 12, | abuseThis story just continues to amaze me. I love every bit of it! I hope to read more soon :) ~Carm~ |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-06-26 ch 12, | abuseFantastic! I approve strongly! |
| anonymous 2008-06-22 ch 11, anon. | abuseI love this story. You are so witty in your writing - it's great! Please update soon! |
| Carmel March 2008-03-10 ch 11, | abuseAbsolutely wonderful. I love every bit of this story :) Keep up the fantastic work! ~Carm~ |
| Riley Hunter 2008-03-07 ch 11, | abusemuahahahah. i shall be evil and NOT review! Wait. But I just reviewed...dang it! then, i guess I'll be Evil AND REVIEW IN ALL CAPS! MUAHAHAHHA ANYWAYS! GOOD CHAPPIE~ |
| grumpirah 2008-03-07 ch 11, | abuseI REALY dislike the evil twin. Can you have her humiliated in front of everyone and force her to marry an old perverted dwarf who wants a child within a year? (sorry over active evil imagination) |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-25 ch 10, | abuseahh! excitement! i adore beauty and the beast,i adore this retelling, and i adore this entire ** thing. ...er, and i'm sorry if you feel offended by the language. kindov a habit. innyhoo, i can't wait for more! lurve, aka. |
| Carmel March 2008-02-04 ch 10, | abuseEven though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :) ~Carm~ |