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| Dragracingqueen 2007-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseIt's good to be true to yourself in a poem. I really thought this one was cute. I can see someone with their hands on their hips, big smile on their face, in a told you so mannor, and just be like, na na na na na na. And stick out the tounge at the end. at least, that would be what I would be doing if someone questioned me on myself, and I was saying something... sorry... anywho! I am liking! Good job! |
| The unbroken 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuseits got a rhythm to the words I like it =] keep it up |
| Kid In Converse 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseNice! I like how simple it it, yet it has all the elements of everything at the same time. Awesome job! :-D |
| tesa131313 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseNot much emotion in this. But it's an okay poem. It's a common subject so you have to find a way to M.A.K.E.I.T.S.T.A.N.D.O.U.T. because a lot of people make poems like this, it's elementary |
| Sadistikal 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job! I liked this one! Keep Writing! |
| commemorativemisery 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abusenice job. nothing more to say lol |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the voice in this. Great declaration of self. Good work. |
| CrazyTurtles 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseGood message. Stay yourself. Good work. |
| Ryumaru shogunate 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseCool! That's all you ever should be! lol! |
| kathleen30263 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! |
| Hunter Victoria 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. I liked the whole set up at the end. 'I'm not ever going to be anything more than just plain me.' |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abusei like this. you just plainly put what you are. its hard to explain but i like this. :P good job |