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The Datura Rose
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseI think it's great that you can relieve your stress through writing poems. And it comes out good, too! I'll read the rest now, and review for each!!
~Sophia
Hyper Cat Girl
2007-03-21
ch 1, anon.
abusewow. That was good. It rhymed like a bad Dr. Suess book, but the thought process behind this was good. When writing a poem, you should keep in mind that the lines that rhyme should have almost the same number of sylables, otherwise it sounds wierd. I'm not complaining or anything (I can't write poems that rhyme at all), it's just a thought that you might want to remember. And on that note, I end my Pointless Rant From a Reviewer. ^_^
dress her up in fairytales
2006-11-11
ch 1,
abusei like this. i can definitely relate. it's powerful.
BrokenHeartedAngel
2006-11-11
ch 1,
abusewow
i dont think your crazy!
this is a good poem! good job!
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