Reviews for liesslashalibis - FictionPress.com

Marajohuiki 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseYet another strong poem... You can use other adjectives besides '**' you know. Except for the fact that you swear every other line or so, this is a masterfully written poem. You don't actually come out and say that you (or your subject) hate this girl, but it's implied strongly enough that there is no other way to look at it.
simpleplan13 2006-12-01 ch 1,	abuseI like the repition and the italiczing... powerful piece.. thanks for your review.. sorry it took so long to return the favor
LoopyGirdlejuice 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abuseI really like it. My favorite part is when you say "i can't promise not to stick your head through one of the holes in your alibi". However, I know you wanted to emphasis how much you hate her tongue, but maybe if you used another adjective instead of "" every time, it would have more imagery or more affect. This is so powerful, and it really helps the reader relate to the writer, because by the end of the poem I totally hated that girl for lying. Well done!