Hi, this may be a lil' weird, but I just got this thing and have no clue how to use it! I was looking throught the froums, and I like yours. You ryhme very cleverly, and your poems inspire me. I've been in a writers block lately. Thank you.

I like this. Something I can relate to, as cliche as that is to say in a review. The seperation of "rain" and "pain" on differnt lines are nice. Good job. )

Rowan.

i like the isolation of the words rain and pain, it makes the reader think of them independantly and also within the context of the poem. i like the way you've used your signature fantasy genre to illustrate importantpoints about life. pretty good stuff!