The last stanza/paragraph whatever (I'm bad with these sort of technicalities) gave a lot of meaning to it. It was good. You are good. Continue with your writing. I'll be reading.

A very powerful piece of poetry. You really hit upon the fact that throughout so many different circumstances feelings and emotions can become so cluttered and confused - so conflicting. You really hit upon the fact that there are things we do and ways we act every day that make us angry at ourselves - an we're the only ones we can blame.

wow, this is amazingly powerful. your very talented. thanks for the review by the way. i look forward to reading more.

This was great.
Like, it was rhymy too.
(Me like rhymes)
It was lengthy too.
(Me like long works as well)
It would suck if this was a true story.
If it is, I'm sorry. =(
Keep it up!

-KM

Very well written. The feelings in this piece are strong and vivid. I like this a lot. Great work and keep writing.