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| Perdix 2007-06-21 ch 1,  | abuse'Sweetness, it’s the night(cap) speaking' loved it. wish i could write free verse like you. xLuke |
| Bleached Roses 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseWhoosh. This poem is amazingly spellbinding. I was captured by the summary and lead all the way through.. and you never lost your feel, but instead made me want more. You really need to write again, I noticed you haven't in awhile.. |
| Jezsh 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI loved the line 'slurring your own edges'; something so gorgeous about it. I think that the format is really effective in places but is perhaps a little overdone in others. Overall I loved the tone of this, some ways like a whisper, others like a hiss. |
| Ajna 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the style of this and the formatting, it's very effective at making up different tones of lines & words in the reader's head. Great piece! |
| Iris Early 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuseyou are so talented you make me want to burn every word i've ever written. |
| iris fucking early 2007-01-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse'it's the night(cap) speaking' and 'scantily clad contempt'. ** YEAH. nice one, wifey-lady. x |
| maxnotevoltage 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. I have to say, I'm spellbound by this poem. Even reading it several times over... It's beautiful, but I have to admit there are parts that I just don't understand. Then again, poetry has never been my forte. [Dancing (by herself)/ Poeple will only take so much/ Scantily clad contempt] Those lines were really awesome. You have a powerful way with words. Peace -- J.max |
| Christybell 2006-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay, a new poem! Its been ages. "The road shines with spilt uncertainty" I love your poetry becuase its so god and i'm jealous. Sniff. Review mine, you biatch. |