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I adore you're writing

Wow. That's cheerful.
It's actually really good. Very depressing. you have good stuff.

aw. But it's so true. Sometimes we're afraid to try. Afraid of being hurt. Afraid of taking the risk to find happiness.
Good job. I like it. Write more!

This is nice! It's sad. but nice.

Both chapters were perfect! You are just so talented at describing things! I LOVE IT! Great job! I hope that you write more stories soon! I would love to read them!!

That was really good! It was so well written that I could see it in my mind, almost like I was watching a movie! Great job! You're very talented, keep up the good work!

P.S. I'm adding it to my favorites!!

Wow! I loved that. It was so bittersweet and the end is so true! You're an awesome writer. You have a lot of talent, especially in description(that's one of my weak points)! I can't wait to read more of your stories! :)