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Star 2008-08-02 . chapter 1
you won't believe this.

my name is Claudia, but my friends call me Star. i'm mexican, aka latina and i am 1/4 colombian. haha.

nice writing. i loved it. i like her. she is def latina and spicy. and nice set up for the rest of the characters. i will keep reading. thanks so much for writing and sharing. it kicks **!
EverythingWeHad 2007-10-21 . chapter 9
Wow...Update?
julieell093 2007-10-01 . chapter 9
update soon plz! [[=
sh0rtii J avenue 2007-09-23 . chapter 9
itz good, continue it
Lauren 2007-08-30 . chapter 6
The kissing sence was great. though i don't get the turned me around so my back was to the wall thing but other than that it was great.
xjennnny 2007-08-30 . chapter 9
awesome :]
September Sapphire 2007-08-30 . chapter 9
Not gona lie i kinda love Ruben! are we gonna see more of Jordan?
yO 2007-04-02 . chapter 8
I LOVE THE STORY.
I usually don't read short stories.. but it seemed so captivating.. XD
Please UPDATE.. I can't wait to see who she chooses.. Personally, I like JASON!
Yeah!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
xjennnny 2007-03-27 . chapter 8
i love this story it is hilarious. please continue! *begginng one knees* :P please update! i wanna kno wat happens *whining* XD
jen 2007-03-06 . chapter 8
love ur story. hope u decide to continue cause i am really bored and i want to no wat happens. so please update...yeah...well please nd thank you
trishh 2007-02-27 . chapter 8
awe, how cute. love your story.. makes me feel all giddy =)

hugs-- buhbye

-TRINITY
PaintSunshine 2007-01-31 . chapter 8
haha funny indeed. signing out. love it. =]
HAPPY B-DAY TO ME. =] er...2 days ago. which meant the 29th. =]
Da Vinci at Work 2007-01-28 . chapter 8
Uh oh...triangle problems. I didn't think this chapter was bad. It was good. Poor Star; she is suffering pretty bad.
jellybeancurd 2007-01-28 . chapter 8
great story going on! But I can't decided between Jason and Jordan! Though, she seems to have MUCH more chemistry with Jason. Wonder what will happen when they go to school...
whateva123 2007-01-28 . chapter 8
nice chapter.i would so prefer it to be jason.update soon.
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