 Renate Seline Zaz 2007-09-08 . chapter 1I just realized that I never reviewed this before...I like it. I love that poetic format. |
 Writing4Eternity 2007-02-08 . chapter 1I love this |
 kenralynn 2006-11-20 . chapter 1 that is a very good question... |
 Ebony Falcon 2006-11-13 . chapter 1Well this one made me think. ^_^ I'm happy you were able to put this thought into words, it really sets a perspective that rests underneath the surface...one we rarely dare to breach.
Please keep writing! ^_^ |
 chippychip 2006-11-13 . chapter 1hHey i really liked this poem! Tought it was very thoughtful and true. I could really connect to it. So couild almost everyone else because i beleive everyone has at one point or another turned away from God. |
 Arafax 2006-11-12 . chapter 1Nice. I agree with you for I also am a Christian. My stories are not necessary religious but my song lyrics are for sure. *goes off to read your other works* |
 Gwendolyn Meissner 2006-11-12 . chapter 1'We' being who? You? Your family/friends? A general group of people? Certainly not humanity. Not all of humanity feels empty for lack of a god. Not all of humanity needs a god. I certainly don't.
In response to your author's note: This certainly is poetry. I don't agree with it, but it's well written, and relays your feelings well. |
 myheartwantsyou 2006-11-12 . chapter 1I cant say I agree with any of this poem at all, but it is well written despite the subject matter. We aren't empty, well, I'm not at least, and I dont believe in god at all. It's a pretty good poem, but I can say I agree with it is all. No offense I hope. (no I'm not an athiest either) |