 The Jynx of Kari 2007-01-17 . chapter 1Hey, I don't know if you remember my review for The club but I'm here again and Ive read your story and LOVED it. Anyone can relate to it and that keeps you hooked till the end. I really enjoy your style. |
 M. Scalora 2006-11-29 . chapter 1excellent! I love the subtleness and the ending. |
 AtlanticHart 2006-11-19 . chapter 1I love it...it starts out like a normal lovesick teenager talking but I was still creeped out all the same. Great job! |
 Wolf Wonderer 2006-11-15 . chapter 1OHH! That was a good twist! I love stories like that. |
 chronas 2006-11-12 . chapter 1 omg. OMG. that kinda freaked me out in the end...eep. |
 Matet 2006-11-12 . chapter 1oh crap man! that was effing good. i didn't even expect that anything like that would happen! i love it. nice job! XD |