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| Bingster 2008-03-20 ch 5,  | abuseAwesome! This is easily one of my favorites now. |
| Melissa Norvell 2007-07-23 ch 5, | abuseWow! I love this story! *faves* I'm definitely going to read it when and if you update next! |
| Madness-Soldier 2006-12-04 ch 5, | abuseDUDEE! THAT ** WAS OFF THE ** CHAIN! Like I said it was like the Terminator in this ** mixed with Spiderman 2. I swear this needs to be a movie from the way its written cause' you did a very good job with this action scene. A+ on this chapter my man, you deserve this **. Oh and I hope everything goes well with your girl, and I updated just to let you know. I corrupt from within... The Madness. |
| Madness-Soldier 2006-12-04 ch 4, | abuseDude that is some straight up terminator 2 type ** my friend. Oh sweet mother mary, what the hell has milly gotten himself into! Oh well, whatever it is, I just hope I never meet it in a dark alley. Nice chapter, and thats all I gots to say. On to the next one! I corrupt from within... The Madness. |
| Madness-Soldier 2006-12-01 ch 3, | abuseNice chapter my friend. Dude, the whole slowing down time and firing off bullets to where the fuse with the incoming bullets was sweet dude. Anyway, don't have time for one of my novel comments, but thanks for the review and keep up the good work on this story. Now go post the next chapter so I can read it Eggman! Oh and I hope everything goes ok with you and that chick. I corrupt from within... The Madness. |
| YJanZ-Providence 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's me, the writer formerly known as YJanZ- Providence! Nice start for the story, it was great. The action at the end of the chapter was cool as hell, plus I liked the drifter reference. lol. This may be the time when I advertise my new story (lol), but Fp is evil right now. Don't forget the joker, aka ♠ce |
| Madness-Soldier 2006-11-21 ch 2, | abuseBullet through the head...what a way to go. Man I feel sorry for Gary though since they executed him, straight up. But since I read the original I know this isn't the end. In fact this is only the beginning. Great chapter man and keep up the good work. I corrupt from within... The Madness. |
| Trazia 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseu have a great imagination i loved this story please update soon i would love to read the next chap |
| Madness-Soldier 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseMan Alex is really calm when getting shot out. First thing I do is stop, drop, and get my black ** the ** out of there! LOL, anyway good start man. I read the one you had on here at first and liked it, so I do believe I'll enjoy the re-write. Keep up the work man, from one member of Meteor Infinity to another. I corrupt from within, Madness |
| SympleSymon 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, man, nice first chapter...great gunfight at the end, too. Can't wait for more. This is the fourth version? Damn, what were the other three like, then? SympleSymon |