Not sure why, but this reminds me of Morrissey (who I happen to be listening to right now). I love love love love this poem. It shows such emotion of someone who has been left alone, untouched by anyone at all. This poem is just brilliant. I think my favorite lines are the last four. Great great job! Could this be my other fave?

I am going to read your poem because your name is Darth.

This poem has nice juxtapositions in it, between who is a stranger and who is not, between whether the kid is a normal person dying inside or a vampire, between who is ugly and who is beautiful. You need to chop this up into sentences--it flowed to much. I'd like to see clarification of what are obviously sentences like after the third line, after the fifth, after the sixth. Though I don't usually bother people about fragments or whatever like that, here your poem has prose to it and ought be organized.

I do like your descriptions, which somehow make words like 'ugly' mean whole levels of things. Or maybe that's just me. Pretty good poem.

Wow... It's even better than when I first read it.

'Someone to control' & 'Someone to caress his moonlit skin' -- I like those lines a lot.

And you found a hella good title. xD