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Reviews For: The Pale Face
Alena D'Etoiles 2006-12-15 . chapter 1
Kung fu? Lezbos? ...w/e. Anyways, I liked this. It is beautiful, especally since you wrote it in 7th grade. Lovely.
Arf106 2006-11-23 . chapter 1
hm... kinda creepish with a vampire theme... different...
trash can art 2006-11-12 . chapter 1
These last two poems seem to be following a vampire-esque trend. :nudge nudge: xD

This is awesome for seventh grade, I have to say. I don't think I even knew how to spell 'beautiful' then. :blush:
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