What an insensitive school! They would never broadcast it like that "everyone is dead". They'd be gentler to the little children, like, "There's been a terrible incident and school is being dismissed earlier today." or something. I dont know.
Hm... a tad bit short, you should maybe make it a bit longer. (I shouldn't be hypocritical though)
My favorite part was some of the really good descriptions you wrote. Also, I think it may be against the Code of Conduct for a teacher to curse in class?
I look forward to an update. (onmemorytoo*coughcough*)
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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb..."
Lady Cullen