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Running Sunrise 2006-11-15 . chapter 1
What an insensitive school! They would never broadcast it like that "everyone is dead". They'd be gentler to the little children, like, "There's been a terrible incident and school is being dismissed earlier today." or something. I dont know.
Lady Cullen 2006-11-13 . chapter 3
Haha, it's okay.
Yay, you made it longer! Woot!
That chapter was alot of dialogue though.
=D
Talk to ya when you get home from school.

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb..."
Lady Cullen
Lady Cullen 2006-11-12 . chapter 1
Hm... a tad bit short, you should maybe make it a bit longer. (I shouldn't be hypocritical though)
My favorite part was some of the really good descriptions you wrote. Also, I think it may be against the Code of Conduct for a teacher to curse in class?

I look forward to an update. (onmemorytoo*coughcough*)

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb..."
Lady Cullen
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